My Poems at Home

In the easter holidays I was bored so I got up and thought of doing a poem. I came up with one about senses and how I felt that day. I hope you enjoy my poem because my teacher seemed to really like it. I called it poems because I thought I was going to do more than one maybe when I get board a can look at other poems to do as well. It was actually really hard but I really enjoyed it. Do you like poems?

Explain T Shaped

This week we started a new T Shaped. The T Shaped is about all of the knowledge that we got out of our writing that was about how to write a explain. The thing that we learnt was all the different things that you need in a explain that I will explain soon. We haven’t done much but we all think it’s really fun. If you don’t know what and explain is it’s when you use certain language features like nominalisation, passive voice, rhetorical questions and more as well, but for now I will tell you those three and the others in my next post that you will be able to read soon. Nominalisation is when  you get a verb and put tion, ure, ent and more as well at the end of the verb and turn it into a noun. Passive voice is when you can’t use word’s like I, you, I’m, your and heaps more that I might be able to tell you in the next blog post with everything else. The last one is Rhetorical questions, Rhetorical questions is when you ask the person that is reading your story a question and they don’t need to answer it if you still don’t get what I mean don’t be afraid to ask me and I can explain it better. 

Chicken Pox

When it was Cross County, I was away because I had chicken pox and they got infected. When I had chicken pox I was lying in bed all day and night. I basically had holes in my skin and they looked like they were scars and no blood was coming out of it. The date of Cross Country was Friday the 30th of August. I was only at school for a couple of practises, I can’t remember my times because it was four weeks ago.

Outside

I wrote a story for Ricky-May. 

Anthology Of Poem

we were learning how to Write Poems with Whea Cath

Dangerous City

We are learning to write a narrative.  I learnt a lot about narrative. It was fun as well as learning.
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creating with science and writing

I.A.L.T. create video showing how we learn by creating science experiments.We also learnt to write Procedure text.

My Holiday

I.A.L.T. To write a descriptive story
My Holiday

Hi, My name is Yazmin and my sisters  names are Kova-Rose and Lily-Bell and my mum’s name is Ruby and I were thinking then we thought go to see what my mum’s new shop looked like.

Afterwards we thought  go to see what my mum’s new shop looked  like and was what she asked for but even better and I went the other way and she yelled out, “YAZMIN, YAZMIN, WHERE ARE YOU?!!!!!” And  I yelled back, “WHERE ARE YOU?” And then we found each other by the car and was happy and when we weren’t together I was scared and I couldn’t believe what happened to me.

Suddenly we went to have some fish and chips and it was delicious and it was from the Haruru  falls takeaways and it took a long time to waste because there was a lot of people who wanted to get fish and chips.

Lastly we went to the park to eat it and then it started to rain and we just got there and the seagulls were being really annoying it was like a seagull storm and we had no fish and chips.

Alliteration

I.A.L.T. use Alliteration in my work.

How To Make A Bed

I.A.L.T create a procedure on a google slide.

Metaphores

I.A.L.T   to put metaphors  in my story's

Disco

I.A.L.T. write on a shared slide. We learn't how to make the font the right size. 

Volcano Poem

Volcano
A volcano is boiling
A volcano is glowing
A volcano is steamy
A volcano is smokey
A volcano smells like smoke
A volcano feels like rocks
A volcano looks like a mountain
A volcano makes me sad when is blows
A volcano sounds like a thunder
A volcano is burning